I Think It's Going to be a True Monday

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I'm already overwhelmed.

This morning I realized my bad guy in the bodyguard story can't be the bad guy. If I put him as the bad guy, well, he had ample opportunity to kidnap my heroine before she got her bodyguard. Why would he make more trouble for himself by going after her when she's got a bodyguard 24/7? So now I have to go layer in a new bad guy.

I still have one major plot point to address in BD before I send it back. I'd injured my hero enough that he lost track of my heroine. Well, my editor pointed out he recovered pretty danged fast. So...I need to injure him enough that he loses the heroine but NOT enough that he can't do what he needs to do the rest of the plot.

And I got my edits for DLB this AM.

This week at school we have a fire drill, a district assessment, a faculty meeting and faculty pictures.

The dh is back at work so I'm in charge of dinner.

And yesterday I was doing so well, getting through my to-do list like wildfire!

At least tonight is new TV.

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2 comments:

MaryC said...

Funny you should mention the RS. I had an idea for your plot. I'll email you.

MJFredrick said...

I'm all ears!

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